Friday, 9 December 2016

Blogging homework due Friday, 16th December

Blogging homework due Friday, 16th December
Winter Poetry

Next week we will be reading and writing poetry.

What does winter mean to you? What kind of images come into your head when you think of winter? How does winter make you feel? Read the poem below and see if any pictures,thoughts or feelings come into your head.....

A Winter's Tale

It's winterfall
Read skies are gleaming
Seagulls are flying over
Swans are floating by
Smoking chimney tops
Am I dreaming?
Am I dreaming?
The nights draw in
There's a silky moon up in the sky
Children are fantasising
Grown-ups are standing by
What a super feeling
Am I dreaming?
Am I dreaming?

So quiet and peaceful
Tranquil and blissful
There's a kind of magic in the air
What a truly magnificent view
A breathtaking scene
With the dreams of the world
In the palm of your hand
A cosy fireside chat
A little this, a little that
Sound of merry laughter skipping by
Gentle rain beating on my face
What an extraordinary place!

It's all so beautiful
Like a landscape painting in the sky
Mountains are zooming higher
Little dogs scream and cry
My world is spinning and spinning and spinning
It's unbelievable
Sends me reeling
Am I dreaming?
Am I dreaming?
Oooh, it's bliss


Songwriters
BRIAN MAY, FREDDIE MERCURY, JOHN DEACON, ROGER TAYLOR

Your task this week is to write a poem about what winter means to you. You can use the poem above, the pictures below and your own ideas to inspire you. Think about what you can see, hear, smell, taste and touch in winter.






I'm looking forward to reading your poems!

28 comments:

  1. In a amazing warm house some one made a fire and marshmelose and a hot cup of tea.The person also made chocolate and even more marshmelose because who does not like a bit of marshmelose.The lady was enjoying it she couldent get enoughf of it.

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  2. In the polish Winter Wonderland

    It is cold, white and beautiful winter
    Tinny snowflakes falling from the blue sky
    Trees as tall as the Shard all covered in a snowy duvet
    I’m walking down the slippery road
    I can hear jingling bells, barking dogs and people singing Christmas carols
    What is this?
    What can I see in the distance?
    It is a sleigh party
    Hills full of snow
    People wearing worm coats, hats and gloves
    Standing by a campfire and happily laughing
    Everyone holding a cup of hot tea with raspberry juice ,honey and lemon
    Children building a snowman and throwing snowballs on to each other
    It looks so good
    May I join them?
    Yes, they are waving at me
    Oh, it’s bliss
    It is so magical
    Just like a Winter Wonderland
    Like a polish Winter Wonderland
    Oh, I miss this so much

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  3. Winter is winter.

    Winter is dark evening.

    Winter is cold, chilly and wrapping up warm.

    Winter is waiting for snow.

    Winter is building snowmen.

    Winter is playing games.

    Winter is waiting for my birthday.

    Winter is taking part in a school play

    winter is visiting santa.

    Winter is Christmas trees, lights and decorations.

    Winter is thinking about when Jesus was born.

    By Callum



































































































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  4. When Winter Comes

    The nights are so long and so short is the day,
    I hardly get anytime to go out and play.

    When Winter Comes

    I wiggle my left hand, I wiggle my right,
    Inside of my mittens so warm and so tigh!

    When Winter Comes

    The town will soon be frosty cold,
    And all the Christmas tree be sold.
    Tree are big, and tree are small
    But Christmas tree are best of all.

    When Winter Comes ...


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  5. IN ENGLAND WINTER WANTER LAND

    IT IS COLD WHITE WINTER

    TINY SNOW FALLING FROM THE SKY

    TREES AS TALL AS THE EIFFFRL TOWER COVERD IN SNOW DROP


    THE DOGS ARE BARKING

    IAM WALKING ON A HILL

    VERY NARROW VERY STEEP SILLPRE ICE

    SLIPPING WHERVER YOU GO

    PEOPLE MAKING STAURE OF ANCIENT GREEK GOD OUT OF SONW


    THORING SNOW FLAKE AT EACH OTHER

    MAKING SNOW MAN OUT OF SNOW


    FREESING COLD

    EVERYONE LITING LAMP

    PEOPLE SINGING CRISMAS SONG

    GET YOU WINTER CLOTHES OUT

    WRAP YOUR SLEF

    IN THE COLD WINTER TREE S ARE STANDING TALLL


    IT IS WONDER FUUL

    JUST LIKE WINTER WAHTER LAND

    JUST LIKE EHGLAND WINTER L AND

    CRISMAS IS COMING



    TIME TO OPERN PREASENT

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  6. Ayesha,
    WINTER
    Winter is freezing.
    In winter It's snow.
    In winter I like to be cosy.
    In winter days are short.
    In winter nights are long.
    In winter I get two weeks off.
    In winter I feel lucky.

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  7. Winter Wonderland

    Snowing heavily outside
    Everybody staying inside
    Nobody’s going to the seaside

    Snowy mountains up above
    Frozen lakes and frozen trees
    Animals sleep throughout winter
    I’m confused!!!
    I’m confused!!!

    Oh! I wish I could sit by the fire
    And sip hot chocolate to my heart’s desire
    Eating marshmallows that I admire

    I can’t wait for spring now
    So winter say a good bye now!!

    By Neha


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  8. Winter wonderland

    Winter a cold time of the year.
    In this season we make snowmen over here
    Never bored to eat drink marshmallows and tea
    Time to go outside to play with me
    Even more fun with snow
    Running very slow


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  9. A Winter tale:

    It's freezing
    Snow is falling
    Birds are leaving
    Hot chimneys are burning
    All grass is wet
    People are making gloves
    Am I dreaming?
    Am I dreaming?
    Children are playing
    Everyone is opening presents

    Trees are dying
    Am I dreaming?
    Am I dreaming?
    So quiet and peaceful
    No sun shine rising
    People making snowmen
    Babies are going to be born


    It feels so calm
    People next to the fire
    AM I dreaming?
    Am I dreaming?
    Kids are have hot chocolate

    from,
    Kian













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  10. Avish

    On winters day, I can here robins tweeting.

    In winter out side I can smell damp.

    In winter I can see snow on the ground.

    On a winters day, I can taste mince pies.

    In winter I can touch snow.


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  11. Winter

    1. Winter is cold

    2. Winter is is snow

    3. Winter is like an ice-cube

    4. Winter is near to a new year

    5. Winter is Christmas time

    6. Winter is a special time of year

    7. Winter is fun with snow

    8. I wish winter was every day

    9. Winter is a cool breeze

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  12. Winter's relaxing

    Yeah it's winter,
    Days are short and nights are long,
    Trees are covered with white snow,
    Roofs are covered with layers of snow
    Smoke flames come out of chimneys,
    Noisy and screaming children
    Walk in deep snow,
    Frosty snowmans are built,
    Sledging is joyful,
    Magical snowflakes are flowing.

    But meanwhile is shivering cold,
    Brrrrr
    Goodbye magnificent views,
    It's time to go inside and have chocolate, marshmellows and hot coco.
    Cosy blanket is ready,
    It's time to go to sleep and say good night snow!

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  13. Winter Winter
    Snow on trees
    Icy benches icy roads
    Christmas lights Christmas trees
    Presents waiting
    Santa's coming
    Building snowmen
    Throwing snow balls
    Snowflakes snowflakes

    from Julia

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    1. Star: good spellings and fantastic verbs.
      Wish: this could be more descriptive in how it makes you feel

      Delete
  14. Winter
    Winter comes winter goes,
    Thin snow flacks come down,
    The roads get blocked,
    the schools close,
    families gather together,
    As snow comes down the degrees drop,
    they radietors come on,
    big santa comes to clean the chimney,
    give me presents to have fun.
    Patrick

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  15. Sanchita

    In Winter, I get excited to celebrate Christmas,
    And make my snowman enormous,
    Although I feel cold,
    I come out to see what toys people have sold,
    Winter makes me gasp in amazement,
    When Santa gives a great entertainment,
    I like Winter because when the frosty days arrive, I have a feeling that it might snow,
    We would like to get presents but parents say no

    Sanchita

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    1. Sanchita a star for using descriptive words like excited, enormous and entertainment.
      A wish that you could have some more punctuations for example a question mark or exclamation marks and full stops.

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  16. I am a winter baby born in the cold
    White fluffy and beautiful,
    That is the snow.

    Winter's dark winter's cold
    my nose is runny
    my toes wrinkle in the snow.

    I wish I went on holiday to a log
    cabin in the snow eating hot chocolate
    and marshmallows whilst being cold.



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  17. Nidhi,

    I like snow , the winter is cold

    My nose is freezing and hands are numb!

    It's fun to walk on sparkling snow, and hear my boots go crunch ,crunch crunch.

    House tops are covered with snowflakes.

    The snow-festooned mountains peaks were embalmed with tiaras of powdering snow.

    All are wet and tired, it's time to have hot chocolate and warming up ourselves by fire.

    Moon and star pave in the sky in pale pearl and diamond showering silver light on ground.

    snowflakes are frosty crystal flowers with petal but no stems.

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  18. subhan

    The Fantastic Poetry

    Winter everywhere

    Its winter fall on chimneys, rivers, mountain and frozen benches,
    benches solid as ice ,
    snowman everywhere
    winter is here
    white snowflakes falling
    its almost Christmas Eve
    Santa Claus is coming to town
    21 elves
    bells are ringing
    evergreen tree covered in snow
    lets go and have some fun
    throwing snowballs at each other
    everyone is singing
    winter time is hear
    everyone is home having hot milk


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  19. 1,Winter is showy

    2,Winter is as cold as autumn

    3,Snow stick on my boot

    4,Snow falls on cars. Snow falls on vans. Snow on trees.

    5,Flowers die on winters week.

    6,Leavs die on the winter day.

    7,Snowflakes shine on the air.

    8,Snowflakes are created on the clouds

    9,When snowflakes are made above the clouds.

    10,When snowflakes are tiny

    Biyon


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    1. Star for talking about winter and snow and how it makes you feel.
      Wish: a poem should not have numbers, and there is a spelling mistake "leav".

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  20. Winter by Jayden

    Winter is here and time for all my favourite things.
    Snowball fights with my family,
    Snow angels in the garden,
    A big cup of hot chocolate with whipped cream and marshmallows,
    And Christmas.
    The sound of laughter all around me,
    The smell of Christmas dinner wafts from the kitchen.
    I love Christmas but not the soggy gloves or my runny nose, but I love the hot bath after a snowball fight and cosying up under my furry blanket on the couch watching a Christmas movie.

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  21. Winter mornings are full of frost,
    The snow covers the ground, things get lost.
    Rotting leaves and slippery floors
    Just be careful don't fall and get sore!!!
    Animals are hibernating from the cold.
    Snow glistening on their fur like silver and gold.

    People keeping warm wearing hats, gloves and scarves,
    Playing in the snow having lots of laughs.
    Winter is the time of year,
    When Christmas falls and people cheer!!!!

    People wearing festive jumpers and hats,
    Snuggled cosily with their gentle pets.
    Christmas trees are in the corner,
    Presents are underneath.
    Milk and cookies are on a plate,
    Ready for Santa to eat.

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  22. soleiman

    Christmas poem

    Frost-bitten trees falling down onto the snow
    cold snow falling on you
    Chilled snow dropping onto the melted snow
    chilly glass on your fingertips.

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  23. Oh it’s winter now
    Snow dancing
    Birds hiding
    Squirrels eating
    Fire warming up
    Oh it’s winter now
    So cold and fun
    Woolly hats worn
    Joyful people run
    Oh it’s winter now
    Snow fights commence
    Snowmen built in peace
    Water turning to ice
    My mum cooking hot rice
    But I wish I had a warm pizza slice
    Oh it’s winter now.


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  24. Oh it’s winter now
    Snow dancing
    Birds hiding
    Squirrels eating
    Fire warming up
    Oh it’s winter now
    So cold and fun
    Woolly hats worn
    Joyful people run
    Oh it’s winter now
    Snow fights commence
    Snowmen built in peace
    Water turning to ice
    My mum cooking hot rice
    But I wish I had a warm pizza slice
    Oh it’s winter now

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  25. From Biyon !WINTER POEM!


    On cold winter day
    Pine trees whispering
    Blanket of snow filters
    Glowing the street sparkle white

    It’s fun to walk in sparkling snow
    Downy flakes falling fast
    The birds are gone
    The world is white
    Nothing like snow

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