As a new way of getting everyone to start checking their own work. Everyone should write a star and a wish on someone else's work to show what is great about the piece of work and what can be improved.
Just hit the reply button under someone's comment to then add your feedback.
You can set it out as simply as:
Star: You have used amazing adjectives that I am going to use in my own work.
Wish: I have noticed a couple of spelling mistakes in some tricky words. Can you spot them?
Thank you.
Mr Openshaw
What is Fairtrade?
ReplyDeleteFeirtraid is a simple yet
important idea-it's all
about giving people who produce
the things you buy a fair
price for their work.It is in Dominican Republic.
This may seem obvious,but
lots of people in poorer countries
have sell there goods at prices so low
that they can't make a decend living.
Wish spelling star punctuation
DeleteStar: you explained fairtrade really good
DeleteWish: there is a spelling mistake in the first sentence, "Feirtraid" thats wrong spelling.
Star: You have included a lot of interesting information that I will include in my own work.
DeleteWish: I have noticed a spelling mistake in the first sentence. Can you spot them?
star: You included good description about fair trade.
Deletewish: You could include more punctuation.
When Sid set for school one day, a happy feeling came his way.It filled up so much he found his paw just lifted of
ReplyDeletethe ground.Without a how, without a why, sid fell up towards
the sky. Through swireling cloud he twirled above
a town world in the land of sun and moon.
What is fair trade?
ReplyDeleteFair trade is a way of buying and selling products that allows the farmers to be paid a fair price for there produce and have better working conditions. The fair trade mark was introduced in 1994, it is a symbol awarded to a product that are sold under certain fair-trading conditions.
by soleiman
star: You used good detail and information!
ReplyDeletewish: use more adjectives about what Fairtrade is.